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Review @ impeccablemelodies

Title: Crush On You

Written By: mbwzy

Reviewer: hae-gi33

Title: 5/5

It was really cute, I could already see the pink, bubbles, and cute action~ Intriguing and yet not too flashy or under dressed. (my wording sounded weird >.<)

Poster/Background: 10/10

Well, I enjoyed looking at it. It was simple but that's what love is sometimes, just pure simplicity. It wasn't overcrowded with people and there the main character girl with all three boys~

Foreword: 4/10

It was kind of disappointing. I liked how you were trying to say that it's a true story of your life but that's not enough for people to want to read it sometimes. Try to grab your reader's attention by adding excerpts from the story or maybe something you want to share to us or maybe even who the characters are to your life~

Plot: 15/15

Hey, it's your story so I'm pretty sure there is no other person with the same exact story as you. It's different and you brightened up the color by twisting up the situations and the people. It was a great idea, and it was cute~

Flow: 9/10

I sometimes felt a rush and I sometimes felt it was a bit slow. It wasn't that easy to notice once I started to reading but you might want to try getting to one point to another as quickly as possible. (<-- I'm always telling myself this but I always end up writing some other stuff~ >.<)

Grammar/Vocabulary: 12/15

Nothing wrong with the grammar except that you don't put spaces for the commas and the periods. I'm not sure if you wrote it directly onto Winglin or not but you should make sure to add those spaces. It seems a bit cluttered. I see some repetitive words in there so try extending your vocabulary a bit more and you're good~

Characterization: 8/10

I'm pretty sure we don't have to get much in here when the people are already on your poster but trying to broaden the vague image of the people is better too. I started doing this review in a library that didn't show any pictures TT_TT

Originality: 14/15

I love the whole love story~ True story and all so I just love it even more that it's happening! >.< You go girl~~~~~

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10

There were so many parts that made me laugh and there were so many parts that I kept awing at. Love is complicated when we think is simple and vice versa. Honestly speaking, I've never "loved" anyone before or crushed on them, but just reading this sort of makes me wonder if that's how it feels like~

Bonus: 5/5

Total: 92/100

Keep up the good work~ Happy New Years

I know I handed this in a bit late sorry~

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