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Monday, January 11, 2010 |
Author: mbwzy
URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/rol/
Reviewer:Song Hannah
Site: http://adorable-luv.blogspot.com/
fits with the story well, and still eye catching.
Only a few mistakes.
The poster and background are cute and well made, but they don’t reflect your story well.
I still think the idea is interesting, but with all the names I ended up very confused.
I wanted to know more about the characters personalities, most writers post traits their characters will have in the forwards, so the readers will understand better.
I have never seen a reincarnation fic before and, you had many original ideas.
There where many grammar mistakes, making it confusion and hard for the reader.
It was all too rushed. If you would have described and explained more, it would have flowed better.
Describing everything more would have helped a lot.
Nice idea, but I was very confused through out the story.
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