Friday, January 15, 2010 | 12:52 PM |

Chapter 30

review @ babypaopao Title : Memories of Love
Author : **princess**
Story URL : http://winglin.net/fanfic/grace
Status : on-going
Reviewer : Sparkly1996
Title: 5 out of 5

I really liked the title. The title fits the story.

Forewords: 7 out of 10

There is a preview, character, and plot. I suggest that you check your grammar.

Poster/Background : 9 out of 10

The Poster and Background works really well with the story. The font of the words don't look good though

Plot: 20 out of 20

The plot is very good. I love it. It doesn't have anyone as a bad person which is interesting.

Creativity/Originality: 8 out of 15

It is very creative but there are stories where girls lose their memory and love someone else.

Flow: 2 out of 5

There were to many grammatical errors. Sometimes it's hard to understand.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 2 out of 5

Again as I said the grammar isn't very good. There is some spelling errors too.

Characterization/Detail: 10 out of 10

Each character is described very well even without the forward. They are each unique too.

Writing Style: 7 out of 10

I like the writing styles but to many grammer errors

Overall Enjoyment: 10 out of 10

I loved it. One of the best stories I have ever read. Good job.

Total: 80 out of 100

Bouns: 5 out of 5- The trailer was awesome and the plot was good.

GRAND TOTAL: 85 out of 100

Reviewer's Note: Great story!

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