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Saturday, January 16, 2010 |
Chapter 45
Review @ smiles-laugh
Love Disease - **princess**
Author : **princess**
Story Title : Love Disease
Story URL : http://winglin.net/fanfic/grace_dbsk/
Reviewer : DBSJ143Title: 5/5- I like the story title. I think it fits your story.
Appearance/Poster/Background: 14/15- I love your poster and background. The background made things easier to read. I like the quote on the poster but its sound like it has some grammatical issue.
Forewords: 3/5- The foreword really gave me a good idea of the characters personalities but it really didn’t make me want to read your story.
Plot: 13/15- I read a couple of stories with a similar plot like yours but you added your own twist to it, which made it more interesting.
Flow: 6/6- The flow was good. There wasn’t any gaps or anything like that.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 5/10- There were a lot of spelling, grammar, and vocabulary mistake in this story. Sometimes I have to re read it to understand what you are trying to say. But I don’t know if English was your first language or not so I only took 5 points off, try to improve on grammar.
Characterization: 8/10- The characters matches the description you gave them.
Originality: 7/8-I feel as if there should be more twist and more shockers in your stories. But so far the twist you have put in it was good.
Writing style: 3/6- Your writing style was good. It can be improve though. I like how you have a song for each chapter. I also like how you indicate that the POV is changing.
Description : 4/10- You should describe the scene and the characters more in the chapter.Sometimes I can picture the scene and sometimes it a bit vague.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10 - Actually I really like your story. I’m going to continue reading you story until its completed.
Overall score: 77/100
(sorry it took me a long time to review this. i was sick for the past week and i was preparing for exam)
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Thanks for the review...
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sorry for not updating..I'm a bit busy this day..
I'm really really sorry i hope you understand me...don't worry Ill update..soon
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