Saturday, January 16, 2010 | 6:12 PM |

Chapter 3

Excerpts

Hi guys! ^^ This isn't a proper chapter, but it's also important to read this!!I don't have a new chapter for you guys but I have some excerpts I've written, and I'm going to show them to you so you get an idea of what will happen. They mostly consist of Bebu scenes. I will add another Jirlina scene later on, so watch out for that. :D
I hope you like them! These scenes will appear in the later parts of the story. Enjoy!
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Aaron closed his eyes. He didn’t want to hear anymore of her pathetic lies. He grabbed her hands and pinned them up on the wall.
“You think it’s fun to play with me?!” Aaron screamed, his breath heavy against Hebe’s cheek.
“Aaron…” Hebe said, trying to calm him down. But her pleas only made his fire ignite, brighter than ever.
“I’ll show you how fun it really is.” Aaron said, whispering into her ear.
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“Aaron…”
“Bye, Hebe.” Aaron muttered, his face stone-cold. It hurt him to see her this way. He wanted to turn back and bring her into his embrace… but he knew he couldn’t. She needed the best. And right now, he wasn’t the best.
Aaron walked away into the darkness, away from her. Even though it killed him just as much as it killed her, he believed it was for the best.
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“Hebe…” Danson breathed on the top of her head. “Believe in love. I never did.” He paused for a moment, and then continued, “till I found you.”
Hebe, shocked, raised her head, the tears in her eyes shimmering in the moonlight.
Danson placed his hand on Hebe’s cheek, his hand caressing her. Then he leant down, and kissed her.
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“Hi… I’m Mike.”
Hebe looked up to see a handsome guy. He looked just like a model. Her heart started palpitating rapidly. Her head felt light and she felt as if she were being lifted up into the air.
She felt as if she were in a dream.
And there was her dream guy, right in front of her.
“I’m Hebe”, she said, smiling.
“Nice to meet you.” His eyes shimmered, as if they were smiling at her.
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“Anyway, so what if I do all that? It’s none of YOUR business.” Hebe said, her voice suddenly rising.
Silence embraced the moment.
Then Aaron spoke, his voice shaky and hardly more than a whisper. “… Do you know how much I hate this feeling?” Aaron muttered, eyes fixed on the ground. “This feeling of anger whenever I see you with another guy..” Aaron gripped Hebe’s shoulders and shook her violently.
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O.o Drama.
Keep on reading! :3
Oh and I have a question for you guys, should I add R rated scenes? Adding them will add to the emotional tension in the story and make it more believable, but I understand that it makes people feel uneasy. But if I do write it, it will not contain like FULL DETAILS. :S So please tell me whether you think I should add them or not. Thx!
I promise to post again soon! <3 you all!
~colourful-raindrops~

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